In the dark still night the stars were shining bright. The ripples in the water were spreading out in all direction as the boat was gliding along. With steady but powerful strokes the bulky man was concentrating as he rowed. Sitting quietly the little boy was looking at the stars up above and gazing into the sea..
Hi Ben, I love the paragraph you've written. You have a wonderful way of describing your scene and capturing the reader. I've never seen La Luna, but you make it sound interesting. Great Job!
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