Pages

Friday 1 August 2014

Writing description about diving



Ben:
As the diver balanced she was taking a deep breath before she sprung of the platform into a somersault. The audience was quietly watching her execute her maneuvers. She flipped over and over until she reached the water, with clean entry when she made into the pool you could see her swimming back up with a bright spark on her body.

1 comment:

  1. I love the story, it really shows that a good story doesn't need to be long. This story reminded me of when I do swimming lessons and when we do dives.I wonder how much effort the divers put into the dive?

    From Hamish HES

    ReplyDelete

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.